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Persephone

Life springs from her flowering feet
like a pup that suckles its mother’s teat
while her hair flows with the Phlegethon’s fire
and curls into a shade of summer heat.

Her voice is far sweeter than the lyre’s
like the innocent touch of two sapphires,
and her skin is a virgin alabaster
protected only by floral attire.
:iconsaiyanprincesscat:

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Rubaiyat: Arabic form. In quatrains. aaba, bbcb, etc.

There wasn't a category for the Rubaiyat... sorry! This is how I see Persephone, Queen of the Underworld. (:

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:iconsaiyanprincesscat:
I'm glad you think so! Thank you very much :) :rose:

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"If you care for others, then dispense with pity and sacrifice and recognize the value in letting them fight their own battles. And when they triumph, they will be even stronger for the victory." -Kreia :rose:
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:iconhannatool:
This is a very good blend of greek imagry and what I would percieve as an Arabic style. I like your rhyme structure, I think you did a good job finding just the right words for your poem. I like your lines
"Life springs from her flowering feet
like a pup that suckles its mother’s teat"
being spring when she is above ground due to her mother's joy. Great work!
:iconsaiyanprincesscat:
Thank you very much!! I'm glad you caught that in the first two lines! ;) Greek mythology holds a very special place in my life, so I'm glad you think I did Persephone justice.

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"If you care for others, then dispense with pity and sacrifice and recognize the value in letting them fight their own battles. And when they triumph, they will be even stronger for the victory." -Kreia :rose:
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:iconhannatool:
what is your favorite greek myth?
:iconsaiyanprincesscat:
Iphigenia's story :)
...and maybe Euripides' version of Electra...
...but I love Persephone... and Psyche...and Antigone... ... ]: This question is too difficult for me, lol.

Yours? :D

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"If you care for others, then dispense with pity and sacrifice and recognize the value in letting them fight their own battles. And when they triumph, they will be even stronger for the victory." -Kreia :rose:
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:iconhannatool:
I like the Odyssey very much; also the story of Apollo and Daphne. I know the story of Persephone, but I don't really know the others.

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